Blue, Blue Skies – 1st November ’09

This is pretty much random for a poem, just literally describing the state of a person, trapped and his wish to be free ^^’

Lost in the darkness of my mind,
The hollow, black feeling, crushing,
Crushing like waves against the rocky shores,
Escaping the confinement, gasping, wanting to be free
Free as the oceans flow, glide through the skies, slicing,
Slicing like birds, floating carelessly, in the blue,
Blue skies.

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  1. =D It’s actually very nice. =P I’ve never tried writing any sort of poetry before but I liked this one! =D Keep practising!

    • Comparing to the latter poems, I don’t really consider this one as a ‘poem’ if you know what I mean ^^ just.. Series of expressions! Thankyou :D

  2. I liked the ”Series of Expression”. =D

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